Project 1 Progress

This is my first progress update of project 1. I focused on timing and style of the words this week, giving me a good base before I further animate. 

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  1. you have great type hierarchy skills and everything fits well together and makes sense. i like the song choice as well

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  2. I love the quote and the placement of the text. It's so pretty

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  3. I like the choice of font here, it matches the voice very well. Only advice I can think of is to experiment with capitals in your words. All lowercase matches the friendly tone, but I think a couple capitals for emphasis could push it even farther, maybe a full caps SOUL for an additional impact at the end?

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  4. I'm really loving the two different typefaces and how they work together with great contrast, as well as the color choices. You could try using up more of the space in the background since the type is usually just in the middle.

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  5. I think you have a very strong start, all the words are timed really well, and all the fonts work really well together. I'd start to try out some effects, and maybe occasionally filling up more of the screen just to add a little diversity.

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  6. Love the style and how engaging this is, the shapes the type make are lovely.

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  7. I agree with Kayla, your type works really well together!

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  8. The font and colors work perfect for Dolly's voice! Can't wait to see what it looks like animated.

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  9. I think a lot of your words are crammed together, you can think about the whole frame and how much space you really have to play with.

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  10. The emphasis using different fonts and sizes are super helpful. I really love it though

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  11. Laney

    Very nice. Great support with music, especially at the end. Might benefit from the Stroke Effect in today's video. Great work, you are in a good place right now.

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